something i created in a moment of madness

[kronas]

i looked in to the world the abyss, light and wind
nature shows it signs that its here oh so bright
the whistling wind showing an invisible entity on its own
the forceful fear starts the heart pumping within

the search continues for ones self
an arch arrow pointing during the search
briskly sought after the world of meaning
the hunt is on but where do i go ?

a misguided soul looks for direction and sees the arrow and sin
a arrow points to something so not pure something thats within
the heart races again but this is nature
the joy of desire and passion rages within

my fair lady it is you who makes this devilish desire
its not a pain its more sin
the power i gain makes me complete
my heart and soul do not weep

call me wierd now

[Paul M]

You're weird.

[Seti]

I thik thats a good piece of work. It's a bit dark though Kronie, I mean how do you know that your not pure ? Ok ok don't answer that

Sian

[Salu]

[tumbleweed passes slowly.........]

[Halcyon]

Intersting.
Its certainly got a lot of feelings and darkness attached to it.

[Jules]

I like it

[kronas]

Originally Posted by whyme38

I like it

good, i didnt really know what type of reaction i would get.

Originally Posted by Halcyon

Intersting.
Its certainly got a lot of feelings and darkness attached to it.

it was not meant to be dark, but its slightly diffarent to what i have done in the past, its quite amazing what a mind can write when its comfortable and at ease.

Originally Posted by Seti

I thik thats a good piece of work. It's a bit dark though Kronie, I mean how do you know that your not pure ? Ok ok don't answer that

Sian

hint: its not me its someone else

its more about searching then finding something, a person or something your looking for in life, then you find it and try to explain in the end paragraph.

Originally Posted by Paul M

You're weird.

danke

[Russ]

If you remember you've shown me other examples of your work in the past and I'll say now what I said then - you're good

(any chance you could knock up something a little lighter? It's the gf's birthday in a few months..... )

[kronas]

Originally Posted by Russ D

If you remember you've shown me other examples of your work in the past and I'll say now what I said then - you're good

(any chance you could knock up something a little lighter? It's the gf's birthday in a few months..... )

il see what i can do, its tough when you dont know anything about a person, i need a focus you see

[Russ]

Oh don't worry, I'll just rip off your work and add her name here and there - she'll never know

[kronas]

Originally Posted by Russ D

Oh don't worry, I'll just rip off your work and add her name here and there - she'll never know

where is the copyright office ?

[kronas]

here is one i made about someone i have seen before briefly and noteably yesterday....

i walked through the door and saw your face
looking at this place you were the only beauty in the space

those dark brown eyes were showing me the light
the beauty and passion is so bright

everyday your on my mind sweetheart
looking for the way to ask.... will you steal my heart

i guess im asking you a question will you be the one
the one to show me the passion and go on a date

i looked in to your eyes i saw innocence and it was a suprise
the world stood still for that moment...the whisper of your voice is
magical and sought with delight

[aliferste]

I thought it was going to be some kind of Frankenstein monster you had created....was all exited for a moment